Thank You to everyone!!!!!
I love the feedback and will be doing more writing and hope I can post the next part by Sunday. It's a goal but if I can't it will be posted by next week.
I went to the Pumpkin Festival and had fun plus I did spend too much money but it was all good. So for now I will be writing more.
Friday, October 28, 2011
Thursday, October 13, 2011
I re-wrote the last part of my story from September 16th, it has been revised and I am still writing more but for now I will post what I have. Hope this time it makes more sense to all of you that follow me and the story.
“Mom where is the book that has all the history of Silver City in it?” asked Matt
“ I think it is in the attic but be careful because the roof is leaking into the attic” said Jen.
Matt ran up the stairs to the second floor and then went to his left and by his room. The attic door was only 5 more feet and he wanted to find the book that held every piece of information on Harper and Klohe plus about the city as well.
Matt reached the door to the attic and opened it and went two steps at a time to get inot the attic and his mom was right about the roof leaking. It was wet and soggy in some areas in the attic but all the rain didn’t help either.
“Why is there so much stuff in this attic?” Matt asked outloud.
Matt looked at everything while he was looking for the book containing all the information and on that he needed to look at. He passed paintings of the royal family, Lords and Ladies and a painting of Matt and Klohe when they were babies.
Matt admired the painting then moved on in the attic.
He finally found the trunk which stood out amongst everything. The trunk was made of cherry wood and had rubys along the edge that glowed when light was shinning in through the window. This trunk was locked but Matt had the key around his neck as did his parents.
When Matt opened the trunk, the book was on top, he grabbed it and sat down on the floor to read through about everything or at least find out why Harper and Klohe were separated.
In the book:
King Nathan and his sister Nica very different in many ways even though they were related by blood. Nica was into dark magic and wanted to rule in her evil ways and make everyone slaves. Her vision was a dark world and dominate every country and conquer earth.
King Nathan was the first born and he was crowned King while Nica was always second best. She hated her brother because her parents like him better. Nathan had a heart and the city loved him and his parents did too.
“We will see the end of days, I will be queen when the time is right! I will take your first born child and raise them as my own and bring this city to it’s knees and crumble!” said Nica to Nathan at his corination.
‘I see you have turned evil through and through in your body Nica, that is a shame and I will now banish you from the city for all eternity so you can not walk here when you are dead. You will never know who my first born is and we will fight you if you even try to harm the city” said Nathan.
With All Nathan sai, he has Nica escorted out of the palace and had the guards put shackels on her, they brought her to the outer most edge of the city where she would live in hiding and not be allowed back into the city.
King Nathan had been looking for a wife so he could settle down and start his own family. One day while he was out iding, he met a young woman named Sakura and he fell in love.
Of course this wasn’t happily ever after, Sakura found out the truth about Nica and was afraid her unborn child would be stolen. Sakura decided to start this book, keep all the secrets in it about the city and about the royal family. It was to be buried and never be found unless all evil prevailed.
Still have more to write to this but I wanted to share it anyways and always love feedback! Hope you enjoy.